Character Name: Smoke of Scorching Flame (Smoke/Smokey)
Character Age: 13 moons
Gender: She cat
Alliance: Tribe of Burning Eclipse
Rank: warrior/hunter
Appearance (6 or more sentences):
She has beautiful smoky black fur that shimmers in the sunlight. At the tips of each hair on her body is a little bit of silver. Her fur blends in well with the dark forest she lives in. She has stunning and intense olive eyes that add to her beauty. She has short silver whiskers but even though they are not the longest she can pick up the tiniest change in the wind with them. Her fur is in-between short and long, so it’s a medium length. She had a long beautiful tail. Her vision is excellent; she is one of the best hunters in her tribe. She has very, very sharp claws that make her the better hunter and fighter.
She is a tabby cross since there are faint black lines on her pelt. Smoke of Scorching Flame is an average sized cat except she is also very slim and has long pretty legs.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
It takes a lot of work to get Smoke of Scorching Flame angry if the reason to get her mad is stupid. But if you are a danger or a threat to her family, clan or lovers wellbeing then she turns into a fierce Tigerclan cat. She will not hesitate for one minute if someone she cares about is in danger. She is a very caring and kind cat but unfortunately some cats who don’t know her well thinks she is all cute and cuddly but she will not stand for this and so when they approach her thinking she is an easy target, boy are they in for a surprise. Smoke of Scorching Flame would much rather be in peace than fight but like I said before if the ones she care for are in danger that whole peace thing goes out the window! Smoke of Scorching Flame is a devoted and loyal tribe cat, you can trust her with any mission or secret. But I think if she really fell in love with a cat outside of her tribe, she might betray the code and maybe even leave. Love is very important to her, I don’t think she would ever be able to live on her own without company. She is a very confident cat but she doesn’t want ‘the world to hear what she has to say.’ She likes to keep her cool and just follow orders instead of being over confident and telling everyone what to do, since she knows this could get her in trouble and being like that gets her nowhere except for a punishment. Smoke of Scorching Flame is most definitely not a crazy she-cat. She always keeps her cool and is very patient to those who do have… problems. She is not a clean freak but neither is she lazy and couldn’t care less. She is very proud of her tribe so of course she wants the place to be acceptable but she isn’t a clean freak at all.
STRENGTHS/WEAKNEDDED:
Strengths: She is a very accomplished hunter and has top notch fighting skills. She is a very admirable warrior and is respected for her skills
Weakness: She gets distracted easily so it’s easy for enemies to sneak up on her. Sometimes she doesn’t know her own strength and she will be afraid of killing cat (which she most certainly does not want to do) she will pause in battle which allows her opponent to give her a nasty wound.
LIKES/DISLIKES:
Likes: Smoke of Scorching Flame absolutely loves the outdoors. She loves the smells and the places she can explore. She loves to interact with other cats since she loves having someone to keep her company.
Dislikes: Smoke of Scorching Flame hates cats that think they are really cool and are up themselves. She absolutely hates getting wet. She doesn’t really like playing because she has better things to do but if she has to, to make others happy then she will.
History (8 or more sentences):
Smoke of Scorching Flame was found by a she cat in the Tribe of Burning Eclipse in the forest. She was abandoned by her mother and was slowly dying from hunger and the cold. She was very lucky to have been found by her foster mother. It was snowing the night she was found and the snow made her pelt look smokier than it already was so that is why her foster mother chose to call her ‘Smoke of Scorching Flame.’ Smoke of Scorching Flame does not know who her real parents are, she asked her foster mother many times but all she could tell Smoke of Scorching Flame was when and where she found her. Smoke of Scorching Flame’s foster mother has two other kits so Smoke of Scorching Flame calls them her brother and sister any way since they have the same mother. Smoke of Scorching Flame’s mentor was very honourable but he died saving her from a fire. Her mother took on her training after woods. Even though she was adopted she had a very good kit hood and still doesn’t really care about her old parents. She doesn’t care because they left her and she felt that, that meant they didn’t care about her so she didn’t care about them. Her mother tried telling her that they may have been many reasons why her real mother left her but Smoke of Scorching Flame had made her decision and no one could change it! She had many best friends and still is with them today. She still remembers her first catch. It was a crow and they are very hard to catch because of their speed. When she brought it back everyone was in awe and the tribe’s Leader told she would make a fine hunter when she grew up. Her first battle was what made her a warrior at the end of it. She fought bravely and the leader knew she was ready to take position as a warrior. She and her mother were very proud when she earned her place in the tribe. In a tribe the ting you are good at is the job you have for the rest of her life and it is pretty obvious what she was chosen to do, hunting.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
Smoke of Scorching Flame stepped out into an over hanging ledge. Her beautiful smoky black pelt ruffling in the wind. The suns rays made her olive green eyes glint and sparkle, adding to her beauty. She sighed and sat down, curling her tail neatly around her paws. She took a deep breath, taking in the smells of the wild. She could smell the dark green forest to the bubbling brooks. She scanned the horizon, "Beautiful..." She whispered to her self. "Just beautiful. She closed her eyes, feeling the wild in the tips of her toes. She laid down on the rock which was warm from the suns rays. She purred, this what she loved about being a tribe cat and not a kitty pet, the freedom and the feeling of... life.
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